September 09, 2004

constructive criticism

Has anybody ever told you that you're a terrible writer? If not, then you are lucky...I am NOT!
Actually, the person didn't really say directly that I am one, but in a very discreet manner implied that I write only negative things, emitting a depressive mood. It's just an observation, is what the person said.

Well, what can I do? I can only write/post true entries here in my blog. I can probably make up a story and lie all the time, pretend that I am elated all the time about the things that are happening in my life...even the depressing and frustrating ones.....pero, ano ako BALIW? Who knows, maybe that's what others do. WEll, as for me, I just mainly try to jot down something that happened to me either on that same day or from the day before or reminisce about the past. They are probably depressive, yes, for I cannot deny experiencing depression sometimes. But hey.... what do I care?

I thank YOU though for telling me. Alam mo na kung sino ka...*wink*

Posted by missP at September 9, 2004 10:53 AM
Comments

hello svelte :)

hahaha... hindi ikaw at alam ko yun ;). actually hindi pa nabalik ang nilalang...o baka ayaw niya nang bumalik kasi di niya feel dito, buwahahaaha!

good luck sa studies mo...i learned French jan sa Vrije Universiteit Brussel, the university right beside etterbeek train station. Kaya siguro wala ako natutunan dahil flemish school yyan, nyahahahahaha!!!

take care! :)

Posted by: missP at September 18, 2004 01:54 AM

sino na namang umaaway sa 'yo? (sana hindi ako hahaha)

sabi nga nila, kapag blogging, if you don't like what you're reading, then don't read! diba? as for you, dearie, keep writing! walang tama't mali sa pagsusulat. ang mali lang yung may sinasaktan nang iba para lang umangat. yon, i'm sure, alam mo na.

inggit talaga ako sa yo, dear. uwi ka na? wowwww. enjoooy!

Posted by: svelte at September 17, 2004 04:15 PM

Hi, Hannahlou,

well, you know, I also realized before, that you look quite sad on the pictures in " A stroll to the past "And some of your entries, such as " Countdown begins " from August 30th ( " I have never felt so bad as lately. " ) or " Sleepover " from July 29th ( " It is really unfortunate, that some Filipinas married to Germans end up being abused and battered. " ) don´t really display a bright, shining moode of yourself.But, if this IS your life, so then post it!It is amazing anyway, that you allow other people to have such a deep view into your soul with this blog.And you are a bad writer?????????Well, I can only say, that sometimes I have to use an English - german dictionary to find out, what some words, that you use, mean . . .

I will stay tuned to your site

see you at work


Rüdiger

Posted by: rüdiger at September 11, 2004 10:33 PM

@kumusta ka kaibigang PinayUSA? salamat sa dalaw mo & enjoy the weekend :)

@hello jennie :) oks lang, coz i say the same to myself experiences ko ang nakasulat dito. may mga tao lang talaga na makukulit ;)
salamat din ha...

@hi atinna, magandang sabado sa iyo. i don't mind na mag comment siya...everybody is entitled to their own opinion...alam mo, i don't really care. mamatay siya sa inggit, hehehe!

HAVE A GOOD WEEKEND EVERYONE!

Posted by: missP at September 11, 2004 07:59 AM

may nang-aaway sa 'yo binibiningP? wag mong pansinin. he/she doesn't deserve your attention. just write away your thoughts and don't give a rat's ass to those kinds of people, they're toxic and the ones that emit negativity and pollute the bloggers atmosphere. it's your journal after all keep it the way you want it. and no you're not a terrible writer.

Posted by: atinna at September 10, 2004 06:31 AM

hi missP! ok lang sa akin whatever you write, coz i enjoy reading them. this is your blog, these are your experiences :) take care!

Posted by: jennie at September 10, 2004 05:06 AM

you're doing just fine and i enjoy reading your blog. stay true to yourself and stay sweet. *s*

Posted by: pinayUSA at September 9, 2004 03:17 PM